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写作 · 如何评分

官方的十个评分项,以及评分结果会告诉你什么

在 Melbourne Grammar 和 NAPLAN 项目中,会员每周写一篇作文,故事和议论文轮流进行。每篇作文都按 NAPLAN 写作评分标准打分:共十个评分项,满分 48 分,与正式阅卷老师使用的标准相同。这不是一个十分制的笼统分数,也不是聊天机器人的主观意见。

十个评分项

Audience
The writer's capacity to orient, engage and affect the reader.
0–6
Text structure
The organisation of narrative features including orientation, complication and resolution into an appropriate and effective text structure.
0–4
Ideas
The creation, selection and crafting of ideas for a narrative.
0–5
Character and setting
Character: the portrayal and development of character. Setting: the development of a sense of place, time and atmosphere.
0–4
Vocabulary
The range and precision of language choices.
0–5
Cohesion
The control of multiple threads and relationships over the whole text, achieved through the use of referring words, substitutions, word associations and text connectives.
0–4
Paragraphing
The segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists the reader to negotiate the narrative.
0–3
Sentence structure
The production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences.
0–6
Punctuation
The use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid reading of the text.
0–5
Spelling
The accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of the words used.
0–6

一篇官方评分样卷

「Axe」,共 738 词,选自 ACARA 记叙文评分指南,得分 44 / 48。下面展示了这篇作文的开头、官方评分,以及阅卷老师的三条批注。

I looked around at the dry barren landscape that was once the place I called home. The remains of my house were still burning, the thick smell of ash and burnt wood lingered in my senses. Looking around, I realised I had nothing left, my family was dead - mum, dad and even my orcish brother Axe. Once again, I was alone. I stared into the distance, half expecting to find an answer to my situation, but instead, I noticed a faint silouhette streaking across the horizon. Even from that far away, I could feel its killer instinct, it was the assailant of my family, it was responsible for my …
Audience6 / 6
Text structure4 / 4
Ideas5 / 5
Character and setting4 / 4
Vocabulary5 / 5
Cohesion4 / 4
Paragraphing2 / 3
Sentence structure5 / 6
Punctuation4 / 5
Spelling5 / 6

评分器如何工作

发送给 AI 评分器的只有作文文字本身,没有任何其他信息(详见隐私声明)。周日报告会列出得分、与上一篇同类作文相比的变化,以及接下来要提升的两个评分项。

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